I am loving this story and adore this update. The way that you describe Jasper is wonderful, the reader can feel the uncertainty and the angst just rolling out of him.
I also really like the fact that you have Alice not already being a vegetarian - during the discussions on sirenprincess's journal I'm always glad to find a likeminded person on that subject :)
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Date: 2009-04-01 01:35 pm (UTC)I also really like the fact that you have Alice not already being a vegetarian - during the discussions on