ext_194212 ([identity profile] thalia-csiny.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] noldolante 2009-04-01 08:46 am (UTC)

Beautifully written as usual. You've written Jasper just perfectly and how he's coping with having Alice in his life, someone so utterly different from his monster life, as he sees it..

Seeing Jasper in pain after he hunted the humans, it was just painful but you wrote it really well. Well done! :D

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